short poem

[gerald strine]

I wrote this a few years ago some of you may have read it but i thought I would share it anyway.


Falls Romance
November 16th 2011
By Jerry Strine

Shafts of light and shadows dance
on the forest floor of falls romance.

leafs of red , yellow and brown
make up the forest crown.

Nuts and fruits are ripe on forest and field
As a gift of natures yield.

Young men of heart gather up their bows
colorful leafs are under their toes.

They seek the bucks
but will take the does.

This is how autumn
feeds their souls.

[rayman]

That's great! Reminiscent of MarkMarine.

[gerald strine]

Thank you xcaliber and rayman.
Hey is Mark Marine still posting ?

[FNARSCOT]

I have a poem written by a Buck.
When the frost is on the pumpkin
That's the time for dickie dunkin
But when the weather is hot and sticky
That's not the time for dunkin dickie

[FNARSCOT]

Dude my mom taught me that. How is a piece of mens' clothing something that offends ,.

[gerald strine]

I have only written 4 poems in my life time so I do not really consider my self a poet and I have not gotten much feed back on the ones I have written but I had fun coming up with them.
As far as butt kicking goes not much of a track record their ether but I am good at keeping the freezer full of venison

[gerald strine]

xcaliber thank you for the feed back and I hope you score when you get to hunt.

[JPjunkie]

xcaliber thank you for the feed back and I hope you score when you get to hunt.

You guys need to go on a date

[FNARSCOT]

There once was a man from Nantucket .OH sorry .